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Date: 2010-08-21 02:25 pm (UTC)
C'est tout simplement magnifique, je suis époustouflé. I spend the whole night reading this, at times falling asleep because I was so tired and waking up trying to stay awake because I had to finish it. The characterization is simply beautiful and the POV switch while still remaining in the 3rd person was very fluid. Your writing is very beautiful and that time line was such an Arthur thing.
It was a beautiful take on the trope of sex-that-turns into more, so much more. There's something that is underlyingly painful about their outlooks on life especially Arthur's.
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