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Date: 2010-04-27 02:53 am (UTC)
Oh wow, [livejournal.com profile] syllic! I'm so fried from work that I'm not sure I can even convey how much I love this story, but I'll do my best.

To start with, Ganieda! I love fanwriters who can work OCs so seamlessly into their stories, and you've done a great job with her. I really found myself rooting for Ganieda as I read her story. Though I wondered why she'd backed out of the trials, acquiescing to that final request from Caradoc absolutely made sense for her. Norvel, too, is very well done. Merlin is lucky to have gotten saddled with him.

And oh, Merlin. He is so adorable, pining after Arthur like that. I loved his realization that he needed to buckle down and help figure out the pyres if he wanted to be by Arthur's side. Very appropriate to his age.

Great job with this! I can't wait for the next part!
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