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Date: 2010-04-21 04:44 am (UTC)
I've ready many stories in the past that focus on the going-ons of the court and of Arthur's reign beginning. I don't know if it's the way this story is worded or the tone and feel of the story, showing your skill as an author, but this one especially makes me picture a medieval kingdom. I don't picture the squeaky, shiny, beautiful people Camelot we see on Merlin. I picture the sheen of sweat and grime, the small group of trusted people gathered in a too hot room lit by candles, simply talking deeply about the future of the people they guard. This was especially true in the tense first couple parts, and as the plot developed the friendship we all know and love between Merlin and Arthur became more apparent (and wonderfully represented). I couldn't quell my excitement every time I got to the bottom of the page and saw the "continued" link. I'm enamored with this story so far and in love with where it could go.
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